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Riparian GM
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| Subject: POETRY SLAM Sat Mar 13, 2010 9:23 pm | |
| BECEAUSE MYTHEE TOLD ME TO D:
you can share first Myfee go on 8T;;;;
edit by Mythee: JUST A NOTE Nobody can use the poems in this thread without the writer's permission, the writer being the person who posted the poem xDD | |
| | | Mythee GM
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| Subject: Re: POETRY SLAM Sat Mar 13, 2010 9:28 pm | |
| Okay fine xD To warm up, some haikus! Then I'll move on to bigger stuff gradually I guess xD - Quote :
- In some lands, fact is
that one out of four seasons is born albino - Quote :
- Look where cities sleep-
Earthbound constellations shine! We stole the night sky | |
| | | Riparian GM
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| Subject: Re: POETRY SLAM Sat Mar 13, 2010 9:48 pm | |
| I actually have a good lot of them linked here but it has a lot of stories. And some are really, really old.
Cybersadhu is Jack's storyline though, and his section+Janan's+Devin's have the most poetry.
;__; er or should I be quoting them here like you did?
I LOVE that first one though D: That's like... on top of my favorite haikus list now | |
| | | Mythee GM
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| Subject: Re: POETRY SLAM Sat Mar 13, 2010 9:54 pm | |
| Aw man, thanks, glad you like x3 <33
...QUOTE THEM HERE. CMON. xDD It's half the fun! You pick one to reply to mine, I pick one to reply to yours! ovo
edit: And that way, we can give each other more immediate feedback to just one thing at a time :3 | |
| | | Riparian GM
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| Subject: Re: POETRY SLAM Sat Mar 13, 2010 11:21 pm | |
| IT'S HARD TO QUOTE MINE HERE BECAUSE OF FORMATTING but okay, lessee - Quote :
- G r i s
I'm pinning Ashen Edges Together; Burnt Pages in Shapes so Meaningful A Collage on an Empty Wall Making Minimal Nothings Into Colossal Somethings By a Simple Path of Placing and Spacing
Take these Letters I've Written, Take a Flame to Their Edge (one or two words consumed by flame) (but the memory remains)
Newsprint Grey Dissolves to Cream, Off-White Paste of Flour to Taste Ink-Stained Substance And each Word-Covered Strip becomes Indiscernible, Lorem-Ipsum Given Form Blocks of Words Wrapped Around And Sculpture given Ground
Smoothes with Plaster, Painted Grey, Formless Form for Shadowplay.
And beneath the Plaster, Newsprint. Seven Obituaries, Six Politicians Five Automobile Ads Four Pieces of a Murder Story Three Local Columns Two Horoscopes
and! One fortune from a cookie.
in black and white that blur together in Papier-Mache, It says to appreciate Overcast Days In More than Subtle Ways. | |
| | | Mythee GM
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| Subject: Re: POETRY SLAM Sun Mar 14, 2010 10:48 am | |
| Oh, I think there's a lot of freedom with formatting in this forum o3o;; Try copy/pasting stuff that is formatted into here directly? Maybe it'll work! x3 AND THAT. That was beautiful. ;v; <33 Wao. I think... the closest thing I have is this from 2003. xDD I was... 12? *keeps archives of poems by date written on computer* - Quote :
- A new little poem
A new little poem What will it contain? Is it a new subject Or is it just the same?
A new little poem Is it short or long? Can it be sung Just like a song?
What is it about? Do we whisper or shout? Who wrote it? How?
So many questions About this poem Well I’ll show them, It’s just the questions.
Any questions?
-Mythee
But meh, since it's comparatively not all that interesting I'll post this one too. - Quote :
- Clarity
Thousands of tiny stars, perched in every tree Like a scintillating flock of birds, stretching to infinity Bounced and slid, dripped and dropped Dancing, singing, the rain has stopped!
One after the other they
Burst into brief scatters of sunlit water Upon the surface of the mirrors below, Like blossoms of light, small sparkling fireworks To celebrate the return of clear blue skies.
-Mythee | |
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| Subject: Re: POETRY SLAM Sun Mar 14, 2010 11:30 am | |
| I did try pasting and it looked like it kept the formatting but when it posted, it didn't, and I'm thinking it's JUUUUST a little far-fetched to go trying to re-space the damn thing. I really like the imagery of the second one, it kinda takes full lead over the wording of the poem itself. now it's time for a Luke poem. c: - Quote :
- Ah, Damn, there's grit in the bottom of my cup,
But
Aah, Damn, I still can't get enough,
It keeps us Alert, it keeps us Awake,
A bit of Borrowed Will to Keep us up Late.
Fire and Kettle,
Dents in the Metal,
There's a Moon over head, Thin to Test the Mettle
Of us on the Range, Brothers Estranged,
Guarding a herd from the Tooth of the Mange
Rifle and Cartridge are one in the same,
But we couldn't do a Damn Thing without our Brown Brew,
Strong as Hell, And as hot to Boot
Not used to it, well, watch out when you Shoot.
Ain't Nothing Worse than the Jitters when something Dark Skitters
Just out of reach of what Night lets you See | |
| | | Mythee GM
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| Subject: Re: POETRY SLAM Sun Mar 14, 2010 12:19 pm | |
| Yeah I'm solving the respacing problem by previewing it in a forum without html formatting (Gaia) and then copy/pasting it here again. n-n;; Ughugh. Sorry. D'8 LOL COFFEE That's epic xDDD For some reason I'm imagining it as a weird little song with just one or two instruments and a man with a low gritty voice singing it idk And thanks! ovo I'm glad you like the imagery, it's the thing I focus on kinda xD;; And this is what happens when you're running low on coffee and doze off woops - Quote :
- Promenade
In the quiet place of slumbering where forgotten symbols lay A world whose giant pendulums fill the sky with their gentle sway
By a numbed will overcome, I walk forwards, promenade
I walk the peaceful hills of dream I walk along rivers of dream I walk between curtains of dream
There are gleaming birds behind green leaves Who swiftly take flight
I walk among figments of dream I walk within gardens of dream I walk with consciousness of dream
Anemone drifting in the wind Faint chimes in the sleepy light Promenade
- Mythee
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| | | Riparian GM
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| Subject: Re: POETRY SLAM Sun Mar 14, 2010 12:53 pm | |
| The first and second parts of that are really great, they have a nice beat to 'em that the rest of the poem doesn't? Especially "By a numbed will overcome\I walk forwards, promenade" That is my favorite part. yess the coffee one is intended for that arrangement exactly C8 By formatting though I mean REALLY WEIRD SPACING, subscript/superscript and typography like that D% It's tough to translate some of my poems over without that, especially the Cybersadhu group. Here's two that went with the piece I wrote about the nightmare in which the toothpuppies first appeared: - Quote :
- Glory to be Unfined
A Riddle Waking in Your Mind
Ask the Question, Free the Keys Stashed in Chaches Hoarded in Waylines, Bylined by Roots Beneath the Earth
The Keys I Have Sought Jangle at my Belt A testament to doors not open (emotions never felt) - Quote :
- There are things in the Dark
That Deign not to Sleep Creatures Hunting and Running Scenting out our life-blood-heart-beat I cannot come to Hate it I only blame myself for to bait it As its growls spell out:
"Don't. Tread. on. Me."
There are fiercer things than panthers and rattlesnakes in places like this. Just... ...Remember, Little Birdie. [The F o r e s t Doesn't L o v e Us.]
(And you have disturbed the Hornet's Nest.) | |
| | | Mythee GM
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| Subject: Re: POETRY SLAM Sun Mar 14, 2010 1:43 pm | |
| Ohh. @v@;; And you'd have to redo the formatting and stuff here if you wanted to post those. Dayum. Two more awesome poems! 8'D I love it when they have a very defined mood. (It's from Jack's point of view?) This one below is titled Armaj because it's a poem based on my OC of the same name. :3 I was in the mood for a brawl and writing this was like. My substitute for a fight. xDD - Quote :
- Flowers breathe fire on this battlefield
They twist and writhe within my blood My mind burns in its poisoned flood I don’t think it can be healed
Look at me I’m bleeding all over this world Finally, the fragrance of ruin calls I’ll break all the darkness, all the walls Destroy it all till the whole sky’s unfurled
My heart is twisting, tightening, twisting in anticipation The violence It overflows
I’m roaring, soaring forever to the song of destruction I’m gushing out Nothing can save you
Goodbye world of ashes farewell land of graves I’ll tear them to pieces and blow them away I’m crushing your cage and you still want to stay These homes made for death, their confinement depraves
My heart is boiling, bursting, boiling with elation The violence It overflows
I’m roaring, soaring forever to the song of destruction I’m gushing out Nothing can save you
Flowers breathe fire on this battlefield They twist and writhe within my blood My mind burns with a poisoned flood I don’t think it can be healed
Look at me I’m fighting against your world Finally, the fragrance of ruin calls I’ll break all the darkness, all the walls Destroy it all till the whole sky’s unfurled
My heart is twisting, tightening, twisting in anticipation The violence It overflows
I’m roaring, soaring forever to the song of destruction I’ll be the end To this illusion AND THEN POKEMON TIME Lol this was for a little event I held where people had to write poems about the pokemon they get from randomizing their national dex number. - Quote :
- Seel
Okay son what's this and why let it out No, I don't want that, don't make me shout Look kid just put it back in its ball NOW What do you mean you don't know how Hey why are you letting it into the pool Tell it to get out that's expensive you fool Oh please tell me it's not using Horn Attack Just say return, just please get it back Oh damn and now it's taking a dump You brat now it'll block up the pump That's it kid just go to your room you're grounded As for you, Seel, you're getting pounded Do you have a problem with that huh what's with that frown Oh god someone save me it's using Take Down
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